RUMBLE HIGH NUMBER ONE - ANIMATED CARTOON PILOT

From the mind of artist and writer Melissa Kay McMahan!

MATURE AUDIENCE - Some profanity, some violence and some sexual oriented situations

Approximate running time 30 minutes (Original Pilot Episode - Raw Script)

Characters introduced | Eric Singer | Charlie Woods |Anton Garvin |Wade Smucks |Larry Moxley |Dominic Bradford |Jasmyn Bradford |Violet Boyette |Hanna Chadwick |Jana Ault |Dennis Nimon |Tonya Nimon | Allison Nimon | Marilyn Nimon | Brook Swift |

First opening - Still pencil sketches along with the names of the main characters. 

FULL FRAME TITLE: Just desserts for breakfast

INT. DINER - Like a Dairy Queen or a Denny's, something like that. It's late morning and while the place is not packet there are a few normal type patrons in the place. Then there is one rounded booth of teenaged guys laughing about something only they know about. On one side of the rounded booth is Charlie Woods and Anton Garvin drinking coffee, munching on bacon and pancakes. On the other side of the booth is Dominic and Eric, Dominic has the mullet of red hair. He is eating bacon and eggs with his coffee. Eric who is wearing his sunglasses has a chocolate milkshake he's drinking with numerous loud obnoxious sounds.

ANTON:

Dude it's bad enough you order a chocolate milkshake for breakfast! (Sighs) But do you have to drink it like that?

Title Sequence at the bottom of the screen, "RUMBLE HIGH NUMBER ONE" Eric ignores Anton and within a few moments has downed most of his milkshake from the straw. They notice a group of cheerleaders busting in through the glass doors, one of them is Hanna Chadwick the head cheerleader. The snob prom queen type, who is a generously endowed blonde bombshell. A cross between Veronica Lake and Loni Anderson in their prime. Eric makes that really annoying sucking sound with his straw as she scowls over at the guys.

ERIC:

Well if it isn't Hanna Chadwick and her squad of stuck up diva's.

DOMINIC:

Says Eric Singer! (Chuckles) The guy who was shot down by the whole squad the last day of school.

CHARLIE:

Man they all made fun of you in cheer form. (Scoffs) But maybe by the time summer break is over and school starts again people will forget.

ANTON:

I doubt it, in this small town everybody remembers everything.

DOMINIC:

You're right Anton. (Smirks) Like that time in first grade when my sister Jasmyn beat you up on the school play ground.

CHARLIE:

I'll never forget that, my nephew just laying there and letting her do it to him.

ANTON:

Shut up Charlie! (Sighs) I don't hit girls.

DOMINIC:

Good thing, because any guy who touches my sister will get his ass kicked by me.

Hanna walks up to the table grimaces at the guys over and then walks off giggling. The rest of the cheerleaders follow her right by the guys table.

ERIC:

Gee, the atmosphere is getting a little too conceited in here isn't it?

The group of guys get up from the table and exit out the doors. Cut to; Jasmyn Bradford and Violet Boyette at the mall sitting at the food-court when Jana Ault walks by with Larry Moxley. They giggle as the two nerds go into the arcade together, then Jasmyn makes kissing sounds.

JASMYN:

Hey Violet, do you think Jana and Larry are on a date? (Giggles) That would make Charlie's day.

Even as Violet laughs her slight Cajun accent is apparent.

VIOLET:

Jasmyn you know that nerd girl is wacky for our Charlie boy.

JASMYN:

She's wacky period. (Smirks) Do you know Charlie caught her peeping in his bedroom window?

VIOLET:

Well the boy should have known better than to leave a ladder outside for her to find.

JASMYN:

I can't help but feel sorry for him though. (Sighs) He doesn't have a real girlfriend, only psycho nerd girl and he can't stand her.

VIOLET:

We can't help him find a girl to love but maybe we can help get rid of the one he loathes.

JASMYN:

Outside of shipping her off to the other side of the world, I doubt that would work. (Sighs) I'm tired, I think I'll call it a day.

Violet stands up when Jasmyn does and they wave good bye to each other. Cut to; Charlie obviously sitting on the toilet leering at a girly magazine.

CHARLIE:

Well your so far are the best looking female I've seen in these magazines. (Smirks) Not quite what I'm looking for but you'll do.

FULL FRAME TITLE: The Plot Thickens

Jana putting a mud-pack on her face, she ends up looking like something from a horror movie. She lays down in her bed and closes her eyes. Cut to: Eric walking down the street, some lady puts something in his hand and he walks on to the arcade in the strip-center. Cut to: Jana sleeping, she is dreaming about Charlie and his arms are crossed even in her fantasy.

JANA:

Oh Charlie I want you.

CHARLIE:

In your dreams nerd girl.

JANA:

But this is my dream.

CHARLIE:

Then you're out of luck Jana.

Charlie fades from Jana's sight, then she wakes up very irate he even turned her down in her dream.

JANA:

No! (Huffy) My dreams about him are suppose to be desirous, not cruel.

Jana shoves her head underneath her pillow and screams. Cut to: Charlie washing a load of laundry in garage when Jana walks in through the open door.

CHARLIE:

Who is it? (Grimaces when he sees it's Jana) What the hell do you want?

JANA:

Why don't we go up to your bedroom and I'll show you?

CHARLIE:

Jana? (Raps) You look like twenty miles of bad road. Even if you shaved you back hair your still simply a horny toad. You're the poster child for birth control. If ugly were a crime girl, you'd never get parole. (Smirks) I know you want what I got down my pants. But even if you were the last girl on earth. You still wouldn't have a chance. When you're around I feel myself go limp, it shirks like it would in a cold chill of frost. So do me a favor buzz-kill and get yourself lost.

JANA:

You know if I didn't know you didn't really mean that, I'd be mad. (Snorts and laughs) You're just playing hard to get.

CHARLIE:

As far as you're concerned, I am impossible to get. (Annoyed) Look I don't have time for this, I have to wash my clothes and do other chores.

JANA:

How about a hug good bye then? (Laughs and snorts) Or better yet a kiss.

Jana puckers her lips at Charlie and he's totally horrified by it, he recoils as she advances towards him in full kiss mode.

CHARLIE:

Damn, you give me the willies! (Shudders) You're so ugly, when your mother went into labor with you, the doctors all went on strike.

JANA:

We could play doctor. (Snorts and laughs) Now tell me where does it hurt?

CHARLIE:

My eyes, every time I look at you. (Scoffs) Now go give yourself an examination.

Charlie picks up a near by broom and uses it to shove Jana out the door, once outside he shuts the door on her.

JANA:

I'll be back! (Marching off and yelling back) I mean it!

Cut to; Larry sitting at the park when Jana marches by all frustrated, he walks up to her.

LARRY:

What's the matter Jana?

JANA:

What's the matter? (Huffy) What's the matter? (Matter of fact) I'll tell you what the matter is! (Aggravated) Charlie still won't go out with me!

LARRY:

Forget him! (Sighs) Why don't you come with me back to my house? I have a project I could uses your opinion on.

Jana nods and she walks off with Larry. Cut to; Charlie sitting under his sheets in bed while he looks at a smutty anime magazine.

CHARLIE:

Too bad for me, you're just a cartoon drawing. (Sighs) I need to find a real female that looks about like you do.

Charlie puts the magazine down and a close up reveals a pencil drawing of a seductive anime female with long hair. Cut to; Larry and Jana are standing by a work bench with a collection of science lap equipment on top of it. One beaker has a purple liquid inside it, he swirls it around as if it were brandy as he picks it up.

LARRY:

I've been working on this for quite awhile but I think I have it just right now. (Smirks) Take a sniff and tell me what you think about it.

Larry puts the purple concoction under Jana's nose and she inhale a tiny amount of it and smiles at him.

JANA:

That's nice. (Smiles) Extractions of lavender and rose blossoms.

LARRY:

Smell it again but take in more of it and tell me how it makes you feel.

Jana takes a great big whiff of the concoction and her eyes grow large from it.

JANA:

I feel better than I did. (Longing sigh) I also sense something else might be in that beaker too?

LARRY:

Ginseng and human pheromone extracts.

JANA:

Hey? (Pouts) What are you trying to do to me, make me a test subject?

LARRY:

There is hardly any in here yet. (Smirks) I need to add much more to it apparently.

JANA:

Oh? (Taking to idea) When you do will that work on Charlie? (Lustfully) I really want him!

LARRY:

It's not for him or any other guy other than me! (Lecherously snickers) It's to get me some ladies.

JANA: If it ever works that is, right?

LARRY:

Right. (Sits the beaker down) However right now I would like something to eat, how about you?

JANA:

Yeah, I'm in the mood for oysters.

Jana and Larry walk out of the room together. Cut to; Eric sleeping on the sofa twitching. Cut to; Dominic and his sister Jasmyn eating with their parents at the dinner table. Cut to; Anton reading a book on the sofa. Cut to; Charlie walking towards old man Nimon's driveway, he stops and looks at the garage apartment. It's empty and dark, he walks past it down the sidewalk. Cut to; Jana and Larry eating at a seafood restaurant. Cut to; Wade Smucks he is walking around the mall when he sees Hanna Chadwick shopping for shoes, he walks up behind her. She doesn't notice him until he gooses her on the buttocks, she huffs and slaps him.

WADE:

Hanna baby, why don't you stop playing these games with me? (Looks over her body licking his lips) I know you want me as bad as I want you. (Smugly) It's written all over you face and in your body language. (Lewdly chortles) So how about you shake your pom-poms for me tonight?

Hanna rolls her eyes as she slinky strolls past Wade to the girls bathroom but he follows her and waits outside the door. Inside the bathroom she checks her hair and powders her nose. Then she opens the door to him and walks past him again but again he follows her. She goes into a lingerie shop, she picks up a bottle of perfume. She looks back to see if he's still there or not, then she seductively places a small dab of it between her cleavage right in front of him. Wade freezes from shock and eyes open wide, she taunts him more by rubbing some on her neck too. Then she saunters over to the lacy teddies and holds one up to herself.

HANNA:

I'll give you something to dream about Wade. (Smirks) But that's all I'll give you.

With that statement Hanna puts the teddy back and sashays towards Wade, he is staring in utter awe at her. He makes an uncontrollable high pitched whine as she grips both his shoulders and touches his chest seductively. Then she back up winks and giggling about what she just did to him, he follows her as she walks off. He notices her walking up to some guy and kissing him like crazy, he grins because he just caught her in the act. Cut to; Jasmyn painting in the room above the garage when Dominic, Anton and Charlie come up the staircase, thus disturbing her progress.

JASMYN:

Agh! (Testy) Why did you three have to come up here?

DOMINIC:

We are going to play cards, do you want to join us sis?

JASMYN:

Can't you see I'm starting a new painting here?

CHARLIE:

What is it? (Pauses) I don't see anything on it yet.

JASMYN:

I was about to paint the scenery when all of you stopped my progress.

ANTON:

I liked that last one you painted of the sunset, the colors were so bold.

JASMYN:

Um? (Pauses) You're right four-eyes, maybe I should paint something else. (Sighs) I'll do this later after I think about it some more.

Everyone gathers around the card table to play. Cut to; Dennis Nimon a feeble old man, he's pulling out the trash can to the road as Charlie and Anton walk past.

DENNIS:

Either one of you want to mow my yard I'll pay you for it. (Coughs) I'm to old to do it myself you know?

CHARLIE:

I guess so but what happened to that kid who was mowing it?

DENNIS:

The little brat stole from me when I let him into the house for some water! I told him thoughts pills are mine before I called the cops on his ass!

Anton and Charlie look at each other before they walk away. Cut to; Marilyn Nimon and her daughter Allison Nimon are at a going away party at her hospital.

ALLISON:

Mom you're going to miss this place aren't you? (Marilyn nods) Me too.

They both take a plate of food and sit with the others at the party. Cut to; Tonya Nimon stretched out on her lower bunk, one foot resting on the floor. She's wearing shorts and a T-shirt, no shoes. She's alone in this drab and gloomy doom room but the room seems cheerful compared to her. Her inner-tension and conflicts seem to darken the atmosphere in the room more. She is getting sleepy and her vision is blurring. Her eyes close and involuntarily, snap open again. A look of revulsion as she blinks her eyes a few times, it's evident she's hesitant to close her eyes. She forces herself to sit up, she stands up and walks over to the bank of windows. Looking out she sees a man and woman walking with a little boy down the sidewalk, this upsets her. She paces the floor back and forth frantically, coming to a stop back in her bunk. Her eyes finally close tight and she's asleep when another girl enters, walking to her own bunk. The girl jumps when fitfully Tonya snarls something out in rage but she realizes that she's asleep and having a nightmare. Cut to; The office of Brook Swift a reporter, she has a cup of coffee in one hand and a photo of Tonya's family in the other. A blonde woman walks in but does not get a chance to say anything for Brook stands up and puts the photo in her hand.

BROOK:

Look I want this story! (Sounding like a vampire hungry for blood) Do you know what getting an interview with Tonya Nimon would mean for my career? (Without waiting for an answer) I'll tell you what it would mean. (Engrossed) She came home from her last day of school to find both her parents bloody on the floor, their killer just leaving. The lady next door hears her screaming, by the time the police arrive she has passed out. No doubt from shock but I was the first one there as she walked out with that policeman. (Ecstatic) I caught the look on her face when none of these other reporters could, she covered her face so quickly with her hands. I did it I got the only shot of her face! (Suddenly sour) Since then I've gotten nothing, she won't talk to the press. She has gone out of her way to avoid me most of all, which I will not have! (Taking a deep breath) I want that interview with her and if I don't get it, I'm going to be very agitated. (Growls) Oh, I haven't got time for all your chit chat, we have to brain storm on getting that interview!

With that Brook grabs the blonde woman and they leave her office. Cut to; Tonya has her hands in the pockets of her uniform jacket as she walks around the fence of the dorm outside. Brook appears suddenly standing on the opposite side of fence and startles Tonya, she gasps.

BROOK:

Tonya, Brook Swift. (Curtly) I was there when your parents were murdered by that unknown assailant. (Smirks) I'm here for an interview from you.

TONYA:

When hell freezes over! (Eyes narrow) Damn it, leave me alone you toxic bitch!

Tonya marches inside without looking back at Brook. Cut to; Charlie outside just after mowing old man Nimon's yard, he takes off his shirt and sits down on a lawn chair. Cut to; Dominic laying in bed as he ogles at a girly magazine, his sister comes in on him and is disgusted.

JASMYN:

Put that away! (Groans) Dad said you have to clean the gutters out, so get busy.

DOMINIC:

What are you going to do?

JASMYN:

Wash dishes and clean the bathrooms. (Sighs) By the way brother dear, you need a girlfriend.

Jasmyn giggles as she exits, Dominic sits up putting the magazine under his mattress. Cut to; Allison packing up the contents of her bedroom into boxes, she sits on the edge of the bed looking at a photo of her family. Cut to; Violet laughing with Eric in the park, they are sitting on a bench together. Wade Smucks walks up to them and they appear to be chatting. They stop when they notice Larry and Jana walking close by on the sidewalk, they laugh about the nerds. More so as Jana hauls Larry into the tree line, once back there Larry thrust Jana against a tree trunk.

JANA:

What are you doing Larry? (Pushing Larry away from her) Don't ever try to touch me like that again! (Huffy) You keep your hands to yourself, got it?

LARRY:

Can't blame a guy for trying. (Annoyed) At least I did unlike Charlie, he doesn't even pay you any mind at all.

Jana slaps Larry before she marches away for him, he gazes fondly after her with his hand on his cheek. Cut to; Hanna in her sexy robe walks into the kitchen when the door bell rings. She walks to the front door and opens it to Wade, she goes to shut the door back in his face. However he already has his foot in the door, he gets inside much to her dismay. He walks past her to the sofa where he plops down and leers suggestively over at her but she's aggravated at him.

WADE:

Hanna, you look especially sexy in that robe. (Smirks) You should be more careful who you open the door to senorita.

HANNA:

Like you? (Scoffs) I couldn't agree more but I'm humoring you for now.

WADE:

And why do you think that is? (Smirks) I know your parents are gone for the two weeks.

HANNA:

So what? (Coaching) Huh? (Scoffs) What do you want Doofus?

WADE:

What do you think I want? (Stands up) I came over to make sure you're not lonely baby.

Wade moves closer to Hanna who takes a step back close to he wall but she laughs at him.

HANNA:

I'm a big girl as you can see and I'll be just fine by myself. (Leans against the wall seductively) So why don't you just get the hell out of here?

Wade chuckles with a goofy grin on his face and slightly blushing moves in on Hanna who gasps from being so close to him. She delicately hits him with her girly fist until he pins her arms to the wall on each side of her head. Both of them were breathing heavily from the struggle she's was putting up, they look at each other.

WADE:

Whoa! (Smirks) Aren't you being a feisty little firecracker? (Suggestively) I know a few ways we could better pass the time besides this.

HANNA:

Are you asking me for a date or just a tryst? (Mock disgust) Either way, the answer is no. (Smirks) Besides that I already have a boyfriend.

WADE:

I know but he isn't here and he doesn't have to find out I've been here with you. (Purrs suggestively) This torrid affair shall forever remain our little secret. (Chuckles) So why don't we stop playing games and just get down to business?

Wade leans into kiss Hanna but she slips away from him and composes herself, then looks back at him.

HANNA:

Give it a rest already, there is no hope that you'll ever getting inside my panties. (Sighs) Now I want you to leave.

WADE:

Oh I'll go in a little bit but I doubt you really want me to go. (Smirks) You simply want me but won't admit it honeybunch.

HANNA:

Admit what? (Scoffs) You are so full of yourself Wade! (Mock disgust) As if I would let you touch me for any reason!

WADE:

You want some advice toots? (Without waiting for an answer) Having to cheat on your boyfriend means he obviously isn't gratifying you somehow.

HANNA:

What? (Gasps) How did you find out? (Catching herself) I don't know what you are talking about!

WADE:

Oh, then who was that guy I saw you French kissed at the mall?

HANNA:

You disgusting voyeur! (Slaps Wade) Get out of here now before I forget I'm a lady!

WADE:

Fine, fine I'm going but I'll see you around babe. (Winks) Maybe even have a chat with your boyfriend about that incident at the mall I saw.

HANNA:

Wait! (Sighs) What do I have to do to get you to keep your mouth shut about that? (Sits on the sofa seductively) Please Wade?

WADE:

Well I'll be fair about this. (Sits next to Hanna) You have to do three little things for me, first how far did that other guy get?

HANNA:

It doesn't matter now, it's over with him. (Pouts) He only got to second base with me but if my boyfriend found out, he'd break up with me.

WADE:

I'm sure he would. (Putting his arm around Hanna) Now that brings me to number two, you might want to drop the frigid vixen material girl routine around guys. (Nuzzling Hanna's hair) It's getting really old, not to mention it's so phony.

Hanna stands up and looks at Wade who has a smug look on his face.

HANNA:

Oh you do not know what you are talking about! (Scoffs) You don't have your information complete about me. You don't really know me at all but I know all about you mister! (Huffy) It galls you that I know so much about you Wade! You're nothing but a two bit cad who hits on every girl, most of the time in vain I might add. (Grunts) Now hurry up with your last portion of blackmail and then get the hell out of my house!

Wade stands up walks closer to Hanna, he's not happy with her outburst at all.

WADE:

Forget about the blackmail Hanna, I wasn't going to tell on you anyway. (Smirks) I just wanted to give you something to worry about, to watch you squirm. (Puts his hand under her chin) Instead I'll give you something to think about. (Kisses Hanna on the cheek) I could have asked you for a hell of a lot more.

HANNA:

What would that happen to be? (Wade whispers in her ear) Oh in your dreams! (Walks to the door) Just get out you depraved little weasel.

Hanna opens the door and no sooner than Wade walks outside she slams the door shut. Cut to; Violet walking in on her father as he puts on his police uniform.

VIOLET:

Before you go to work I want to ask you if I can have a friend stay the night? (Her dad nods) Great! Thank you dad, I hate being here all alone.

Violet walks out of the room. Cut to; Tonya writing on a table alone in a bare room, the scene is ominous and cold. She hears laughter from the hallway, her hostility and anger rise to the surface. The laughter from the hallway is getting louder, she stands up and sticks her head out the door.

TONYA:

Shut up! (Yelling) I'm trying to write something and you two giggle boxes are bothering the hell out of me! (Shuts the door) Empty headed twits!

Tonya goes back to her seat, she looks sad now, not crying but her deep sigh says it all. Cut to; Allison with her mother Marilyn are met at the front door by Dennis Nimon, the old man is happy to see them. They all walk into the living room and sit down there is a major unconvertible silence between the three of them.

ALLISON:

So? (Pauses) This is home for all of us now, huh?

DENNIS:

Yes and when I die I'm leaving everything to you, since your my only grandchild.

ALLISON:

Oh, I... (Blinks) Thank you. (Pauses) I'm sure you'll live a long time grandpa.

DENNIS:

Well that's sweet of you child but I know I'm not long for this world. (Coughs) All you should worry about right now is unpacking.

ALLISON:

We have some stuff out in the car but the rest of the stuff is on it's way. (Smiles) It's going to be great here living with cousin Tonya.

DENNIS:

It's been a long time since I saw my grand niece Tonya. (Sighs) Oh course I understand why Marilyn but let's not talk about that now.

Marilyn and Dennis look at Allison then each other, it's clear they are keeping something from her.

ALLISON:

What? (Pouts) Oh I get it. (Stands up) I think I'll go pick out my room then.

Allison leaves the room as Marilyn frowns at Dennis. Cut to; Charlie's eating a burger outside when Jana literally pops up from behind him in some bushes.

JANA:

Hello! (Sits in the empty seat next to Charlie) How are you cherished one?

Charlie's mood turns bleak as he lowers his burger down into it's package, reluctantly looks at Jana with a scowl on his face.

CHARLIE:

Ugh! (Revolted) Well if it isn't the parasite!

JANA:

So you're eating huh?

CHARLIE:

Who told? (Scoffs) I was until you ruined my appetite. (Stands up) I'm going to try to eat it on my way home, don't follow me!

Charlie grabs his food and leaves a dejected Jana sitting at the table alone. Cut to; The dorm room at night, all the girls are asleep in their bunks save one empty one. From the massive bathroom comes rhythmic grunting, barrages of breath absolutely metered in frequency. Close up; A pair of female hands grip one of the bars of the heavily bolted shower rod. Tendons knot and release in the well developed muscles as her arms do pull-ups. A mane of long brown hair dips in and out of frame between her muscular arms. Tonya's voluptuous body is straight and taut as she moves like a machine. Only in a tank top and shorts she is hanging from the top, then she moves her legs up and around the shower rod. Once her knees are in place she's does abdomen crunches but it smooth like a high wire act at a circus. Cut to; Jasmyn and Violet asleep on the floor. Cut to; Dominic in his pajamas looking out his bedroom window. Cut to; Wade walking around in the park. Cut to; Hanna asleep in her bed. Cut to; Jana looking through her cache of Charlie images. By the looks of them they were not taken with his consent and some were taken from outside a window to confirm that. Cut to; Eric his smoky bedroom he's leaning back and slightly chucking. Cut to; Anton asleep. Cut to; Charlie asleep. Cut to; Tonya decreasing down from the heavily bolted shower rod like a bird in flight, she's hot and sweaty. Her silhouette reflects off the wall as she undresses, only indistinct parts of her flesh show as she walks into the shower. Then the curtain pulls in shutting off the view of her all together, the shower turns on. Cut to; Allison sleeping on the floor in a empty room. She wakes up as the sun comes through the window and across her face, she yawns softly. Cut to; Tonya dispassionately sitting in an interview room across from a smug woman. Then woman taps her pen on the desk, she has obviously made some assumptions that aren't on the mark.

TONYA:

Humph! (Stony tone) I've been dealing with my parents murder very well, now I need to move past it.

The smug woman gives a calculated paternal smile that says she does not believe Tonya, this provokes Tonya. Yet she only glares before forcing a smile. The woman leans back, studying her. Toying with her really, she shakes her head no. She pins Tonya with his sweet reptilian gaze that would make cement dissolve.

SMUG WOMAN:

You don't seem afraid or confused, your attitude has been very positive lately. (Pauses) Your improvement is unbelievable and that's the problem. (Smirks) I think you're just telling me what you want me to hear, in order for me to stop asking you these questions. (Tight on Tonya's reaction of rage) I don't believe what you've been telling me, you are bottling up your feelings. (Smirks) I'm afraid I don't see any choice but to recommend that you see a therapist.

The smug woman gives Tonya a very stern look.Tonya's eyes turn cold and baneful, she knows this woman has just playing with her all along.

TONYA:

You bitch! (Growls) You don't know me! (Coldly) You think you or anyone else asking me a bunch of stupid questions is going to help me? (Scoffs) That all the psycho-babble you want me to endure from some shrink is going to console me? (Mater of fact) Think again because I will not tolerate it!

SMUG WOMAN:

You don't have a choice Tonya, you're underage. (Smirks) It depends to a certain extent on you how long you will be analyzed.

TONYA:

And you say you want to help me? (Huffy) I don't want anyone digging around in my head, so just leave me alone! That will help me immensely!

SMUG WOMAN:

No young lady the last thing you need is to be left alone. (Smirks) That's part of your problem right there, you may leave now.

Tonya doesn't move at first until another girl comes in and the smug woman clears her throat.

TONYA:

Fine I'll leave but I'm not done with this yet. (Stands up) You can bet of that little Miss. Mary Sunshine. (To the other girl) Good luck, you'll need it.

Tonya walks out the door as the other girl sits in the seat she just got up from. Tonya turns and marches angrily away down the corridor, others in the area are startled by her vehemence. Cut to; Allison sitting in the back yard lounge chair, she thinks back to when her and Tonya played together as little kids. Tonya is as happy as Allison at this point in her life. Cut to; Tonya in her uniform sitting on a bench by herself in the court yard, she is calm but sad. Cut to; Jana putting her hair in ponytails while looking in the bathroom mirror, she leans over and kisses her refection. Cut to; Anton and Jasmyn sitting across from Dominic eating snacks at the table, her brother doesn't notice as Anton ogles her. Dominic is too busy eating out of self pity to notice anything else, so Jasmyn smiles back at Anton.

JASMYN:

Would you be interested in playing a game with me four-eyes?

ANTON:

Um, what kind of game did you have in mind?

JASMYN:

Why don't you just come with me and find out? (To Dominic) You want to join us bro?

DOMINIC:

Nah. (Sighs) I'm going for a long walk.

JASMYN:

Fine but remember you have to bring in the garbage receptacles from the street tonight. (Dominic nods) Have fun then.

Jasmyn and Anton leave the kitchen as Dominic walks out the back door, he walks towards the park. Cut to; Some younger teen girls walk past Allison in the park as she goes inside the woman's bathroom. Just missing Dominic coming out of the men's bathroom, he looks at the younger girls but they are too young for him. Then he sees a nice looking blonde girl his age. He starts to approach her but then another guy comes up and kisses her. Dominic just stands there brooding as Allison walks back out of the bathroom behind him, they end up walking in the same direction. It seems as if they are going to have a chance encounter right there but they look off in opposite directions. Dominic turns to walk back where he came from just missing seeing Allison again. As they pass each other they both stop just a few feet apart from each other, all they have to do is turn to face each other. However they both just shake their heads and walk away in the opposite direction out of frame. Cut to; Charlie and Anton in their garage cleaning it up a bit, when Allison walks by but they don't notice her. Cut to; Hanna brushing her hair at her make up mirror, she is ready for bed wearing a nice rose blush colored negligee. She hears something elsewhere in the house and goes out to investigate she finds the back door slightly ajar. She shuts and locks it but obviously wonders about it, just then a hand grasp her mouth. Her muffled scream makes Wade chuckle, he forcefully wraps his other arm around her waist pulling into his from behind. She struggles but he has too good of a hold of her, she still does not know who it is though.

WADE:

Hanna you should be more careful about locking your doors at night. (Letting go of Hanna) I could have been a modern day Jack the Ripper.

HANNA:

Wade! (Yells) You big dumb jerk! (Sighs in relief) I prefer Jack the Ripper, he was less a pain in the neck than you are.

WADE:

Well I could make you scream. (Smirks) Though the only long object I have on me is in my pants.

HANNA:

Disgusting! (Fussing) What the hell are you doing back here anyway you imbecile?

WADE:

I told you I'd be back sweets. (Walks over to the sofa and sits down) I just didn't tell you when. (Eyeing her) Expecting someone?

HANNA:

I was but he isn't coming over after all. (Huffs) But you can just go now! (Sighs) I'll be just fine by myself.

WADE:

I'm sorry Hanna but I'm not leaving a lamb like you alone to the wolfs.

HANNA:

So I get a weasel instead? (Sighs) You want to stay? Stay on the couch! (Yawns) I'm going to bed.

WADE:

Well, well, well? (Purrs suggestively) Can I tuck you in? (Snickers) Va va va voom!

HANNA:

I have a lock on my bedroom door Wade.

Hanna walks down the hall back to her room, the next thing Wade hears is her door slam shut.

WADE:

Yeah, like that will stop me. (Standing up and walking down the hall) Think again Hanna.

Wade puts his ear up to the door, then he jimmies the door open swiftly and opens the door. Inside Hanna is in bed he climes in next to her, she rolls over and hugs him. Until she figures out nobody should be in bed with her then she opens her eyes and jumps out of bed with a scream.

HANNA:

What the hell are you doing in my bed Wade?

WADE:

Aw come on my feisty luscious lovely, you know what I'm doing here. (Lustfully) Why fight it, toots? You desire me, don't you?

HANNA:

Uh, excuse me? (Laughs) I'm a cheerleader and you're a only a cad, so I don't think so!

WADE:

Let go of your inhibitions Hanna, you know there is a certain amount of chemistry between us. 

HANNA:

Only when we are in a chemistry class together. (Points to the door) Now get out of my bed and out of my house!

WADE:

Alright. (Gets out of bed) I'll go but you know what I told is is the truth. (Walks over to Hanna) At some point you'll cave in to me.

Hanna says nothing as Wade exits, she gets into bed and nestled under her covers. She hugs her pillow as if it were going to comfort her somehow. Cut to; Violet, Jasmyn, Charlie, Anton, Dominic and Eric laying around on the ground at the park looking up at the sky.

ERIC:

Um? (Pauses) Is anybody going to say anything?

DOMINIC:

Dude this is the summer between middle and high school for us, there will be no other like it.

CHARLIE:

Maybe so but it's just like last summer for me, no girlfriend and avoiding Jana like the plague.

ANTON:

You're too picky about females Charlie, you need to lower your standards.

JASMYN:

Charlie is waiting for the perfect girl but there is no such thing.

VIOLET: There is no such thing as perfection in either sex.

ERIC:

Yet sex can be perfect. (Snickers) Nobody here but me would know that.

CHARLIE, ANTON, DOMINIC, JASMYN:

(In unison) Shut up Eric!

VIOLET:

I'm not saying a word one way or the other.

ERIC:

Since when do you care what other people think Violet? (Snickers) Since when?

VIOLET:

Since when do you think at all Eric?

The others crack up laughing at Violet's statement but Eric sits up and looks at the others.

ERIC:

Oh shut the hell up all of you!

VIOLET:

Settle down Eric. (Sits up and looks at Eric) We're just kidding around with you.

ERIC:

You just wait, I'll get you back for that Violet. (Smirks) When you least suspect it too!

DOMINIC:

That is if he remembers to. (To Eric) Face it dude, you have the attention span of a caterpillar.

ERIC:

The jokes on you smart guy! (Points at Dominic) That's why I keep notes!

All of them laugh until Eric pulls out a pen and a piece of paper from the pocket of his jeans. Cut to; Jana reading a dry textbook in bed, she yawns and then falls asleep. Cut to; Tonya walking down the hall when one of the other girls accidentally clips her, as that girl is talking to another girl. Tonya clears her throat and the other girls stop in their tracks, they look back as Tonya gives both of them a nefarious glare. To make her point to them Tonya walks between them knocking them back a bit.

TONYA:

Next time watch where you're going or someone could get hurt.

GIRL:

I'm sorry! I'm sorry!

A path clears for Tonya as she marches through a pack of trembling girls who would be in her way otherwise. She walks inside the doors and down the corridor, she goes into the bathroom. Nobody else is in there but her, she kicks the trash can over and punches the wall.

TONYA:

I have to get out of here!

Defiant and intense like a cornered animal Tonya slumps down along the wall until she is sitting on the floor. Cut to; Larry ogles older women at the mall from the lingerie shop window, one sexy bombshell slinks past him as she goes into the shop.

LARRY:

Nice! (Wolf whistles) Very nice.

From behind him comes Wade's voice.

WADE:

She's way, way out of your league. (Walking up to Larry) Where's Jana? (Smirks) She's in your species of nerds.

LARRY:

As opposed to the species of slime you slithered from?

WADE:

Shut the hell up nerd!

Wade smacks Larry on is head for his statement and walks away, then Allison appears headed for the shop.

LARRY:

Wow! (Smiles) What enchanting creature do we have here?

Allison cringes and just walks away from Larry and the lingerie shop. Cut to; Marilyn at the hospital she is filling out employment documents. Cut to; Violet does not see Eric who is waiting to spring out at her from behind a sign. As she walks past him he acts as if he's going to rip off her dress but all he does is makes an onomatopoeia. The of the mock sound of her dress being ripped off and then he laughs about it, until she slaps him for it.

VIOLET:

Why you little fungus!

ERIC:

I told you I'd get you back.

VIOLET:

Eric, you are depriving a village somewhere of their idiot!

Violet growls with anger marches off away from Eric. Cut to; Back at the diner from the start of the script. Again it's late morning but there is only one rounded booth occupied. On one side of the booth is Charlie Woods and Anton Garvin drinking coffee, munching on bacon and pancakes. On the other side of the booth is Dominic and Eric both eating bacon and eggs with coffee. Eric who is still wearing his sunglasses, eats his food with gusto and is done within moments.

ERIC:

Oh man! (Belches) That was good, I wish my mom cooked like that.

DOMINIC:

Eric you're mom knows two recipes, just add water and ready to eat. (Snickers) You should get Charlie to teach her how to cook.

ANTON:

Yeah Charlie, do Eric a favor. (Snickers) The boy looks a bit peaked to me from lack of vitamins.

ERIC:

Wait if Charlie is such a good cook, then why do we always eat here?

CHARLIE:

Are you bums going to pay me to cook for you? (Silence for a beat) Then my points been made now hasn't it?

Just as Charlie gives a smug smirk Jana walks into the diner and right up to Charlie and the other fellows.

JANA:

So eating breakfast huh?

CHARLIE:

Who told? (Scoffs) Jana there's a sign on the entrance that says no dogs allowed, so you better leave before they call the pound on you.

DOMINIC:

Absolutely! (Smirks) Your unwelcome at our table, so why don't you go chase squirrels in the park or something?

JANA:

Oh you guys are such kidders! (Giggles and snorts) I'll be right back, I need to use the little girls room.

Totally oblivious to the grouchy demeanor she's getting from Charlie and the other guys, she walks to the bathroom.

CHARLIE:

I'm getting out of here before she comes back!

Charlie takes the last few bites of his food and heads for the doors. After a beat of eating what's left, the others are headed for the door too. Cut to Jana in the bathroom, the toilet is flushing as she walks to the sink. Cut to; The rounded booth the guys were sitting in now clean from any debris, then she walks back to the now empty diner from the bathroom. She walks out the door looking for the guys but they are long gone.

FULL FRAME TITLE: Stay tooned

Tonya doing yoga exercises outside, a faded conversation between some of the girls around her is in the background. She is not swayed by the girls chatter now, she is focused on her own movements. Cut to; Violet and Jasmyn see Anton sitting by himself on a mall bench, then approach on each side of him.

ANTON:

Hello ladies, how are you doing?

Anton says this while looking directly at Jasmyn, in a kawaii way and sort of ignoring Violet.

VIOLET:

Oh you noticed me did you Anton? (Smirks) Hey look Jasmyn, I'm going to the bathroom. (Thinking) Leave you two love birds alone for awhile.

Violet walks away from Jasmyn and Anton who are just looking at each other for a beat.

JASMYN:

So are you at the mall alone?

ANTON:

Yeah, Charlie is sick in bed. (Trying to be nonchalant) So did your brother tag along with you and Violet?

Jasmyn is obviously frustrated that Anton had to bring up her brother Dominic.

JASMYN:

My brother went over at Eric's house about noon but I don't know if he's still there are not.

ANTON:

Oh? (Changes the subject) I was thinking about going home but...

Before Anton can say anything else Violet returns, she smiles at him and Jasmyn.

VIOLET:

We should eat something before we shop for clothes. (To Anton) It's on me if you join us Blondie.

Anton stands up and moves closer to Jasmyn.

JASMYN:

If you want to hang out with a couple of chicks shopping for school clothes? (Smirks) You can hold the bags for us four-eyes.

VIOLET:

He can help us by picking out some out fits that look good on us too.

JASMYN:

As long as he doesn't try to peek at us in the dressing rooms, I have no problem with it.

ANTON:

Well I guess I could. (Laughing and scratching the back of his head) I mean since Violet is getting me something to eat.

JASMYN:

Come on you dork!

Jasmyn pulls Anton along with her as Violet laughs about it. Juxtapose; The girls are looking clothes while Anton sits bored out of his mind. Juxtapose; Anton is still sitting in the same bored way but the girls are in the dressing rooms now. His mood changes as Jasmyn walks out in a skimpy dress, she looks in the mirror. She doesn't notice Anton is behind her panting so hard he couldn't keep a match lit. Violet walks out and chuckles as she notices him about to hyperventilate.

VIOLET:

Breath boy! (Smirks) You must if you want to live you know?

JASMYN:

This dress is too short, if it was any shorter my panties would be showing. (Sighs) I'm going to go take it off!

As Jasmyn walks back to the dressing room, Anton turns beat red and Violet snickers.

VIOLET:

Oh very subtle boy, I can't tell you like the girl.

ANTON:

Me? (Waving his hands and shaking his head) Who said I like her?

VIOLET:

Why you did buster. (Giggles) You've sucked all the fresh air from the mall just looking at her in that skimpy dress.

ANTON:

It's just hot in here, that's all.

VIOLET:

Um, hum. (Not buying Anton's denial) Sure. (Smirks) That heat you're feeling is coming from your gonads boy!

Anton about blushes to death as Violet walks back to the dressing rooms, just as Jasmyn walks out in a dress with a long skirt.

JASMYN:

What do you think of this skirt four-eyes?

ANTON:

Um? (Snaps out of it) The 1800's called they want their frontier style back.

JASMYN:

Is it that bad? (Anton nods) Well that's the last of the clothes and I'm not getting any of them. Back into my clothes and we can go home I guess.

Violet comes out in her own dress and sits next to Anton, Jasmyn goes back to change.

ANTON:

She wants to go home, how about you?

VIOLET:

Same here. (Smirks) Why don't you stop being a chicken and tell her how you feel about her?

ANTON:

Look, she's my best friends sister and that's it! (Sighs) There is nothing between us, besides she doesn't like me very much anyway.

VIOLET:

You think so huh? (Smirks) Or is it that you are just afraid Dominic will kick your butt for liking his sister that way?

ANTON:

What is with you Violet? (Sighs) I mean really? You know she picks on me all the time, calling me four-eyes and dork.

VIOLET:

Fine she doesn't like you and you don't like her. (Smirks) And that's that.

ANTON:

Thank you! (Sighs) I want to go home too, I'm tired.

Jasmyn walks out dressed to go home, so Violet and Anton follow her out the door. Violet catches Anton looking at Jasmyn's behind and she lets out a long telling smirk. Cut to; Dominic in the kitchen when Jasmyn walks in from the mall, they sit at the table together.

DOMINIC:

No new clothes? (Scoffs) Not even a new pair of shoes? What gives?

JASMYN:

I couldn't find anything new I liked. (Sighs) I think I should go back alone to shop. (Yawns) I'm tired, I'm going to take a shower and go to bed.

DOMINIC:

It won't be long before I do the same, it's been a long day. (Yawns) Good night pest.

JASMYN:

Good night slug.

Jasmyn walks out leaving Dominic alone, he is in deep thought. FIN